Arabic Coffee
- White vs. Black
- Coffee
- Comparison of everday objects to deeper meanings
- “Luck lives” “gather, grounds”
- Lots of hard consonants
- 6 lines, 1 sentence
- “Two times. No sugar in his pot” stands out
- Very long stanza
- Emotions and feelings portrayed like people
- Does not seem organized with a usual flow, it breaks at weird places
- There is this and there is more
- She has taken a daily occurance and made more out of it
My Grandmother in the Stars
- “It is possible we will not meet again” is very forward
- “On earth” softens” it
- 4 lines, 2 sentences
- “On earth” “with dust” come at the same place in different lines
- “To open” as well
- 7 lines, 3 sentences
- I bow to your rugged feat
- Relating it back to grandmother
- Uses commas instead of line breaks
- S2L2
- 9 lines, 3 sentences
- Never again
- Much shorter line
- In itialics
- Like they will never meet again?
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