Thursday, April 27, 2017

Poetry Analysis 2

4. A famous classical poet has said that the aim of literature is ‘to teach and to delight’. In the work ONE poet you have studied, examine some poems where both of these aims (instruction and something that pleases the reader) have been included, and show how that has been achieved.

“‘Hope’ is the thing with feathers” by Emily Dickinson is an example of her teaching her readers to have hope, and also entertaining us with clever rhyme schemes and a song-like meter.
Emily Dickinson wants her readers to move forward with hope in their souls. She writes “Hope...” “never stops at all,” indicating that Hope is strong. Perhaps the best example of her teaching is the line “and sore must be the storm - / That could abash the little bird” She is saying something very deep there, while disguising it in sweet poetry. Hope is too strong to be hurt by any storm, and we, the readers, should know that hope will always be there. The last stanza also has some important meanings and teachings about hope. “I’ve heard it in the chillest land - / And on the strangest Sea - “ are two examples of contrasting extremes in which we, the readers, can find hope. We know we can because the speaker, who is introduced in these lines, does themselves. “Chillest” and “strangest” are two descriptive words that make it very clear that these environments are fairly extreme. The last two lines “Yet - never - in Extremity, / It asked a crumb - of me.” are deeply personal, but the reader can learn from them as well. The newly introduced speaker tells us that despite the “chillest land” and “strangest sea,” despite these “extremities”, the little bird - hope- has never asked for anything in return. The reader can always look towards hope and know it will be there.
There is also a lot of fun, entertainment aspects of this poem. The first is the meter, which is mostly determined by the syllable pattern. The lines alternate between 6 and 8 syllables each, except for the first, which is only 7. This makes the first line stand out, and read nearly like a title. The alternating pattern in the rest of the lines give the poem a “bouncy” tone and it sounds very spring-like. It is also easy to read and understand, because it is simple to predict. She also has a rhyme scheme, slant rhyme in the first stanza, alternating in the second, and alternating different syllables in the last. This pattern almost makes it sound child-like, but also very sweet. Again, the flow of the lines can be predicted and read very easily. The dashes at the end and between lines certainly helps with the meter of the poem as well. Since this poem, like a lot of her others, was made into a song, it is easy to see how the flow of it was written for entertainment purposes. In addition, throughout the poem, there is this metaphor of a bird. While this is used for teaching purposes, it ties the entire thing together very nicely. The references start with the obvious - “thing with feathers,” “perches” “sings the tune without the words.” They then become a little more obscure: “in the Gale” “asked a crumb” or “Extremity,” which can mean a location but also your fingers, which you feed and hold birds with. The usage of words like “sweetest” “sings” and “little” are very positive, and give that poem its positive vibe.

(For some reason this posted as a draft last night and not a blog post?? But it’s up now. obviously.)

Tuesday, April 25, 2017

Poetry Analysis 1

Poets often include in their poems places that evoke strong emotion. In the work of ONE poet you have studied, show how settings in poems have been connected to the presentation of feelings.

Naomi Shihab Nye’s poem “My Father and the Fig Tree” explores her father’s connection to his home land, his nomadic life, vs his home in Texas. The first, and perhaps most obvious presentation of a feeling is in the title. Fig trees have cultural and religious connections to Palestine. Thus, the Fig Tree could be interpreted as “Palestine” or “Home.” “Home invokes feelings of belonging, and of comfort.
Another place she describes is in the first stanza, at her bedside. “In the evening he sat by my bed, weaving folktales like vivid little scarves.” The phrase “Vivid little scarves” stands out here. Each word has two syllables and repetition of consonants, either V, L, or S. These are softer consonants than, say, D or T. The softer consonant and repetition of syllables make the phrase flow very well. The flow of that sentence causes the reader to feel comfort, similar to the title. It is clear that the speaker is comfortable with their father.
In the third stanza another setting is introduced. The reader learns that the speaker moved around a lot, and that they never had a fig tree. “Years passed, we lived in many houses, / none had figtrees. / We had lima beans, zucchini, parsley, beets. / "Plant one!" my mother said. / But my father never did. / He tended garden half-heartedly, forgot to water, / let the okra get too big. / "What a dreamer he is. Look how many things / he starts and doesn't finish." The shortest line in that stanza is “none had figtrees.” This line stands out to the reader as a sadder line, because of the connotation of “home” with “figtree” and then the loss of the figtree means loss of home. It is also a lot shorter than the other lines, so it is clear that the reader should feel something there - and that emotion is sadness or loss. Then, there is the “conversation” between mother and father. While this is not in a particular setting, it can be inferred that they are at one of their many houses from the line “Years passed, we lived in many houses.” In the depiction of the mother, she is telling him to plant a figtree, create his own “home.” However, the father refuses to.  Instead, he “half-heartedly” tended to the garden. “Half - heartedly” is certainly a depressing phrase, and sets the tone for the entire rest of the stanza. It is depressing because it implies having literally half of a heart, but figuratively, since the heart is connected to love, he is doing things with less love, less care. That definitely sets up the rest of the stanza to be rather depressing to the reader.
The last stanza, however, is full of much more hope. The first line “The last time he moved,” tells you he is done moving, and has finally settled down somewhere - we know the rest of the stanza will take place at his final home. He is “chanting a song” that the speaker has never heard before - he is singing, and happy, and the speaker has never seen him like this. This brings hope to the reader, especially after learning that he was unhappy in his previous situations. Then, his location is specified to Dallas, Texas. The state of Texas conjures images of white, American rednecks and republicans. There’s nothing wrong with that, but it does not fit in with the father we have been introduced to. Learning he is in Dallas, Texas, confuses the reader. But then, the speaker tells us about the beautiful figtree in his backyard. This figtree that has always been representing home, and comfort, is finally there for him, and to that there is a feeling of relief. The reader is happy for the father, who finally feels at home. The last line, “of a world that was always his own,” brings those same happy feelings.

Friday, April 21, 2017

Poem Set 2

Arabic Coffee
  • White vs. Black
    • Coffee
  • Comparison of everday objects to deeper meanings
  • “Luck lives” “gather, grounds”
    • Lots of hard consonants
  • 6 lines, 1 sentence
  • “Two times. No sugar in his pot” stands out
  • Very long stanza
  • Emotions and feelings portrayed like people
  • Does not seem organized with a usual flow, it breaks at weird places
  • There is this and there is more
    • She has taken a daily occurance and made more out of it

My Grandmother in the Stars

  • “It is possible we will not meet again” is very forward
    • “On earth” softens” it
  • 4 lines, 2 sentences
  • “On earth” “with dust” come at the same place in different lines
    • “To open” as well
  • 7 lines, 3 sentences
  • I bow to your rugged feat
    • Relating it back to grandmother
  • Uses commas instead of line breaks
    • S2L2
  • 9 lines, 3 sentences
  • Never again
    • Much shorter line
    • In itialics
    • Like they will never meet again?

Thursday, April 20, 2017

Poetry

My Father and the Fig Tree
  • Starts in the middle of a scene, kind of
  • “Weaving folktales like vivid little scarves
    • Out of place in the mood of the poem so far
  • He tells stories just like his dad dod
  • Very colloquial, not much imagery in poem itself but some in the dialogue
    • Also there is dialogue
  • Doesn’t feel like there is a deeper meaning or symbolism
  • Not heavy or deep, just a sweet story


Blood
  • Breaks story into short lines that keep the reader intrigued
  • A decent amount about her father
  • Connected to religion
  • Doesn’t usually break lines with punctuation
  • Sometimes the line breaks make it seem choppier
  • “The headlines clot in my blood” Is an interesting comparison
  • Figs again!
  • Brings back recurring themes to keep the story relevant


The Words Under the Words
  • Much more metaphor and similes
  • Symbolism of the car
  • Discussing a person
  • Similar to a story, but the line breaks make it flow very well


Two Countries

  • Can skin remember? Makes it deeper and have more meaning
  • Treats individual part of a person as an entire person
    • Is she trying to say that we are all just skin?
  • Corridors of cinnamon and rope? Interesting imagery here
  • I think she is calling humankind purely skin

Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Staging Proposal

If I were to stage My Love, My Love, I would begin by calling it “The Peasant Girl.” This is because I absolutely hate the title My Love My Love. I think it is cliche and overdone. From there, I would consider the message I want to get across with this adaptation. There are a few things about each character that really stayed with me throughout this story: How much I hate Desiree, and how horrible of a person I find Daniel to be. However, marketing a show that has no likable characters is a very difficult feat. In my refusal to make Desiree anything less than naive, I would focus on the gods. I find them to be incredibly important members of this “cast.” The storyline would be as such: Kind, yet stern Agwe rescues a young peasant girl, and the gods watch her grow up. Now that she is full grown, she is beginning to drift away from the gods. Erzulie sends the boy in the car to give Desiree something to hold on to, so she doesn’t drift away completely. Papa Ge tries to scare her into following the trend of the group. Asaka and Erzulie, the two women, support Desiree in her search for happiness. Papa Ge and Agwe do not. So, instead of a story of a girl in love, it becomes a story of fighting for a girl who cannot be saved. It becomes about the relationships between god and god, as well as god and man.
Therefore, I would have the gods practically always onstage. There would be two levels in my set: The stage, and then a surrounding balcony. (Think Hamilton with less ladders.) The gods usually occupy the top level - unless they are directly interacting with the humans. These humans reside on the lower level. There is a stark difference between the set for the humans and the gods, and the set for the rich and the poor. The humans, no matter what, are not at all modern. The peasants live in huts while the rich live in grand estates. The gods, however, reside in the top. Acting as a barrier so actor’s don’t fall off is glass paneling. If possible, I would even have the gods stand on a glass floor, supported by metal rods. The poor would live very close to the ground, in lots of color. Their homes would be in shambles. The rich, however, live on an incline. This is because the rich consider themselves similar to a higher power.
However, costuming would tell another story. While the rich tend to be physically closer to the gods, the gods would dress much more like the peasants. They would be in flowy costumes. The only difference is that the gods wear white, with accent colors corresponding to each god, and the peasants wear muted versions of the same colors. Except for Desiree. Desiree wears purple, because no god has that color. The rich people wear gold and silver, and their clothes tend to be much more form fitting. This is directly opposing the rich belief that they are closer to gods because they are physically higher, because in character they are nothing like each other.
Lighting is very important in this adaptation. If I could, I would have the god’s platform lit in bright white light from the bottom and top. There is no real difference in lighting in rich vs poor, however, when the rich are indoors and alone, they only have candlelight - so on stage, that lighting has to be fairly dim.

Friday, April 14, 2017

In-class duality

The quote that really stood out to me on page 60 was "despite her annoyance, his words chilled her. She walked home in the late evening in panic. Her imagined shackled grew real. Her feet dragged. Occasionally she passed villagers threading their way through the woods toward the Vaudan ceremony in the hills, but she was too preoccupied to return their greeting." (Guy 60). Rosa Guy paints a vivid scene. You can imagine Désirée's shackled legs, as she slowly limps back home. You can see how the words of M. Bien connu has chained her to this place. I believe this quote also says a lot about the relationship between Désirée and the villagers. When M. Bienconnu says she must stay home, she is physically harmed by his words. She views the village as shackles, keeping her from freedom. While the rest of the villiage goes to a ceremony, she drags herself the opposite direction. She doesn't even respond to them when they say hi - she's too busy thinking about herself. In this quote, there is so much clear tension.

Thursday, April 13, 2017

In-Class Costuming

I would dress Ti Moune in much more colors than the rest of the peasants. Mama, Tonton, and the rest would be in brown and tans, and Ti Moune in something with much more color. Maybe she would be in blue, because Agwe is her Loa. However, I really don't want to attach her to one god, so I'd probably actually put her in something completely different from the gods. Possibly purple? I know we did that in Once on This Island, but I really liked it. She would also wear a pendant around her neck that Agwe also has, possibly he wears it as a ring. Ti Moune's hair is always down, unlike the rest of the peasants, who put it up because they are working. Her face is cleaner than most, and her skirt is much shorter. She wears less layers. I would have the dress be too small for her, because she is growing more than the rest and I want to show that. It's low cut, not so low that it's on purpose, but intentionally making her appear older. In contrast, the peasants would be in long, dirty, tan skirts. No peasant would be in colors other than brown. The men and women would wear bandanas around their heads, to keep the sweat out of their eyes. Ti Moune doesn't, she doesn't work like they do. Every peasant would have dirt on their faces, except for Ti Moune.

Wednesday, April 12, 2017

My Love My Love 10-16

CHAPTER TEN
  • She is in city
  • Ran and fell
  • Who is the voice?
    • She called it mama
  • Nobody is allowing her through
  • Ok, I just realized how little of the book is actually spent with Daniel
  • Laughter good, then bad
  • Lucifus? Like Lucifer?
    • Guards it, but can never enter
  • A gift from Erzulie
  • Gates to heaven?
CHAPTER ELEVEN
  • She thought she looked good
  • The shoes are too tight
    • They hurt her
    • Plastic- new material to her??
  • Thought - were the Gods the vendors?
  • D does not speak french
  • A car!!!
  • Older beuxhomme does not like peasants
  • Younger one kind of understands??
  • She will die before she leaves
    • FORESHADOWING
  • Takes off her shoes at night
  • Is free at night
  • Daniel is annoying too
  • She can finally hold him!!
CHAPTER TWELVE
  • Madame Mathilde
    • Hello new character
  • M is like “what are you doing D you are being stupid’
    • M is currently my favorite character
  • Daniel is stupid
    • I slept! She must stay! I am putting her in danger but its fine! Im also engaged but its fine!
  • Danny boy is actually dying
  • BONE SOUP
  • D refuses to let her papillons go
    • Bad idea D
  • Is this sex? I am confused? If it's sex say its sex? Like honestly?
    • Edit; definitely sex
  • They are sooo in looooveeee
  • ANDREA
    • Lol she ded
  • Daniel
    • I found my beauty! You fixed me!
    • I am annoyed
  • Oh no its papa ge
    • Is lucifus papa ge
CHAPTER THIRTEEN
  • Daniel is planning a ball
  • D shows up! She’s dressed in white! She’s so pretty!
  • She feels like they are truly in love
  • She has finally blossomed and finished her transformation
  • M is trying to help her
    • She is still my fav character
  • Can’t find any more butterflies
  • Lucifus is Papa Ge
CHAPTER FOURTEEN
  • Andrea is back
  • Daniel says they are not bound by marriage promises
  • Does he want them both?
    • He is very happy to see Andrea
  • Daniel is fully cured
    • Except for his leg tho
    • Which is kind of her fault, if he was in a hospital he would be fine
  • He talks about Andrea a lot
  • M is concerned
  • Andrea is white
  • Andrea asks to keep D, ignoring they are in love
    • Daniel just goes with it
  • D gets her own room
CHAPTER FIFTEEN
  • M tries to give her advice
  • Daniel leaves
  • Suggests she goes with the Italian
  • Lost the red comb
  • He just wants D to stay and love them both? How?
    • Does he think she's a dog?
  • Gods visit her in a dream
    • She has to pay
  • Papa Ge wants her to kill herself
  • No, he wants her to kill Daniel
    • But no, he smiles in his sleep
  • She dropped the knife and ran
  • Everything was a trick by Papa Ge
  • Lucifus throws her out
  • Nobody remembers her
  • They think she is just telling a story
CHAPTER SIXTEEN
  • Almost the wedding!!
  • Skies get dark
    • Agwe
    • Punishing Daniel?
  • D wasn’t eating or sleeping
  • M doesn’t even recognize her
  • Did I miss the arm thing?
    • Yes? Can’t find it
  • Daniel looked over her just like his dad did
  • Crowd trampled over D
  • Papillons appeared on the hill
    • Swarmed the people
  • All that was left was her corpse
  • She is dead
  • Lucifus dumps her into a dumpster
  • Nobody cares